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Review of chapter "Strangers In The Night" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
Spike! Can't wait to see how that little 'chat' went...
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [16 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strangers In The Night" from ManyNamedChibi
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Yay for the update! I've been away from the site or I would've encouraged ya!
Review By [ManyNamedChibi] • Date [16 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strangers In The Night" from IceWhisper
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Yay! Spike is here! Haha. I can't wait for him to meet Warren.

UPDATE ASAP!
Review By [IceWhisper] • Date [8 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strangers In The Night" from mousemt
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Nice. I like how you're presenting Dawn.
Review By [mousemt] • Date [7 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strangers In The Night" from Bobboky
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very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strangers In The Night" from Rhyssia
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Yay, an update! Yay, an update! Was so pleased, I went back from the beginning, and re-read. Of course, then I found a couple of errors. Two relate to each other, one is all by its self. ;)

Well yeah, he didn't trust me alone. Plus he totally had toys for me to play with and hot chocolate and stuff. He's better now. The military put a chip in his head so he can't hurt people and he fell in love with Buffy, - chapter 2

it doesn't look fine to me," Dawn told her boyfriend. She leaned forward and tapped Magenta on the arm. The girl turned to her friend. ( Layla talking to Will in Chapter 5)

"Spike these are my Aunt and Uncle, Josie and Steve. Guys, this is Spike. Remember I told you about him? He used to be bad but then he switched to our side," She didn't mention the Army or the chip. She hadn't told that part to her aunt and uncle, but Spike had said he wanted to earn his sould and she had faith that he would. (Chapter 7 - see comment about Chapter 2)
Comments from author:
About 3 seconds from the loading of this comment I will fix those mistakes!!!!

Thanks for letting me know
- D
Review By [Rhyssia] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strangers In The Night" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
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yea Spike shows up smoking a fag! love it well worth the wait keep it up and I'll try and hold off those evil plot bunnies but some idiot feed them Triple Espresso's

oh yea that was me
Comments from author:
... and that is why I'm making you watch them overnight from now on. *shakes finger menacingly*
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strangers In The Night" from stephaniebhall
Review:
Woohoo, update! Great to see Spike showing up to see his bit. Love the line about the dark side having cookies but Joyce having cocoa.
Comments from author:
I told my brother that the dark side had cookies but the light side had cheesecake earlier today and then I was writing and I was like ... Joyce was always making Spike hot cocoa and she was always adding extra marshmallows for him.
Review By [stephaniebhall] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strangers In The Night" from DirectorLady
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Yay! Update! I love the line, "the dark side may have cookies but Joyce always had cocoa." That just made me laugh. And Yay!! Spike!!! Can't wait for the showdown between Warren and the oh-so-flammable Spike. Keep up the good writing. And, btw, poke! Poke for next chapter!
Review By [DirectorLady] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strangers In The Night" from Jess
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LOL! I love that you have added Spike to the mix. I think he will be a great addition to the story line. *HUGS*
Review By [Jess] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All The Pretty Clouds" from grouchie
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you have a great story i hope we see more soon i can't wait to see when you spike to the mix
Review By [grouchie] • Date [30 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All The Pretty Clouds" from DirectorLady
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Please consider this prodding you to continue. I love this story. That said, I don't think Spike would allow Dawn to leave without him following shortly. How will the Strongholds deal with that? Further how will Spike deal with the fact that Warren's response to the shovel talk might be bad for his oh-so-flammable body? Next chapter soon please.
Review By [DirectorLady] • Date [21 Jun 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All The Pretty Clouds" from (Past Donor)InvisibleA
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Great job, my CP has been down so i just got to read your last two chapters today and i have to say keep up the good work!

IA
Review By [(Past Donor)InvisibleA] • Date [3 Jun 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All The Pretty Clouds" from alphaursa
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Daawnnny! poor girl being overwhelmed by the world, whats going to get her going again? Great job-you are truly hitting the stages of emotion (grief) she would be passing though!
Review By [alphaursa] • Date [27 May 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "All The Pretty Clouds" from ManyNamedChibi
Review:
Sad... but I like. Defiantly need more of this...
Review By [ManyNamedChibi] • Date [24 May 08] • Not Rated
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