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Things Dawn's Not Allowed to do at Hogwarts...

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Review of chapter "The Dawn Mark" from TarnishedGold
Review:
ROTFLMAO..... HeHeHeHeHe.... Oh my Godess... HeHeHeHe. That was so totally unexpected... I love it.
Gold
Comments from author:
Yeah, no sleep and lots of Mountain Dew make Joe a very weird boy...
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [21 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Dawn Mark" from (Recent Donor)Smurfette
Review:
Okay, this had me giggling away like a mad woman. Reason #4,953 You Shouldn't Sleep In Class: Dawn Summers might make you a Death Eater. I can just see if someone else saw the mark first!

I do hope you're going to go through some of the official "50 things I am not allowed to do at Hogwarts", yes?
Comments from author:
Oh hell yeah. Coming up next will be "I am not to owl copies of the Evil Overlord List to suspected Death Eaters" followed by... I'm thinking "'You might be a pureblood if...' jokes will get me in trouble, especially in front of Slytherins". After all, the Evil Overlord List couldn't possibly help Voldemort. He's already screwed.

35. "I will not turn into a snake. It never helps."
Review By [(Recent Donor)Smurfette] • Date [21 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Dawn Mark" from cwolf
Review:
Wouldn't that be "The Dawn Mark"? *grin*
Comments from author:
LOL. I'm gonna change the chapter title to that... but the Dark Mark stays... ;)
Review By [cwolf] • Date [21 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "House Elves' Local 77" from Lucinda
Review:
bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha.....
.....thump. ow. must remember to pause in the maniacal laughter to breathe.
let's try that again.
bwahahahaha... hahahahaha... hahahaha....

yes, that's much better.

Very amusing twist on the Scoobie at Hogwarts story. If it makes you feel better about your pairings record, who knows what else Dawn & Hermione may have been up to?
Comments from author:
Maybe they'll try to get a GSA going at Hogwarts after they help the elves... ;)
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [20 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "House Elves' Local 77" from Stardust
Review:
While it doesn't have my favorite objects in it, it's still good. In fact, the very idea that Dawn and Hermione working together with the House elves doesn't surprise me in the least with their strike plan. Rocktacular. No, there is nothing embarassing about this review, other then the fact that I enjoy seeing Harry and his table love.
Comments from author:
You make it sound far dirtier than it is, somehow...
Review By [Stardust] • Date [20 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "House Elves' Local 77" from SamJames
Review:
You made me laugh. Thanks.

Of course, this behavior would be way out of character for the elves except Dobby and Winky, but it is still funny.
Comments from author:
Hey, just because you want to work for wizards doesn't mean you want to get kicked by them or ordered to iron your hands.
Review By [SamJames] • Date [20 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "House Elves' Local 77" from LenaMaria
Review:
Haha. Just imagine, house elves over the country picking up the chant...households will be left unclean...and Hogwarts' students will go unfed. I know it says completed, but a sequel would be appreciated. A lot.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I always mark stuff completed but it gets sequels anyways. The slutty Dawn story was "completed" and ended up being eleven chapters long.

All drug jokes aside, I wrote this in that half-awake state between when I wake up and when I drink my first Mt. Dew. So you might get more tomorrow morning.
Review By [LenaMaria] • Date [19 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "House Elves' Local 77" from EbonySilvers
Review:
ROTFLMAO!
Comments from author:
O rly?
Review By [EbonySilvers] • Date [19 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "House Elves' Local 77" from eponine
Review:
Sweet.
Comments from author:
And low? o_O
Review By [eponine] • Date [19 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "House Elves' Local 77" from cwolf
Review:
and the thought that occured to me as I read this... was a line from Monty Pythons Holy Grail

"Bring out your dead!"

BANG

MEOW
Comments from author:
I'm not dead!
Review By [cwolf] • Date [19 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "House Elves' Local 77" from TarnishedGold
Review:
ROFL... I can just picture it.
Comments from author:
I'm trying to get someone to draw it for me...
Review By [TarnishedGold] • Date [19 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "House Elves' Local 77" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
Chuckles. Then snorts. Then laughs. Then joins Harry in banging the head.

I will forever see the house elves in a Newsies like strike chant....

"Open the Gates and Sieze the Day!! Don't be afraid and don't Delay!"
Comments from author:
I'll probably do a sequel with Hermione and Dawn sitting down with a list of demands and negotiating with Dumbledore... and probably McGonagall and Snape just for extra comedy.
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [19 May 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "House Elves' Local 77" from Lamia
Review:
HA! That was funny as hell!
But I am worried about you. Dawn with no lesbians?
Do you have a fever or something?
Comments from author:
Nah, I'm working on a sequel to Leech that will be lesbirific. Although I could always do Dawn/Hermione in a sequel.
Review By [Lamia] • Date [19 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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