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Review of chapter "Part 2" from Harry
*GROAN* The Order is up to its usual mischief AGAIN! When will they learn that it doesn't PAY to mess with the Slayer and her family! You do, YOU PAY! And I know Spike well enough to know he wouldn't say what he did to Angel if he didn't mean it!
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1" from Harry
*Kosh Voice* And so it begins. Yes, and so it begins again. This time DAWN is the one having to deal with being immortal! But I love the idea of Adam coming down to get her and Spike out of town to let things calmed down. Now, on with the story!
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 28" from Ansku
Intriguing :) Is the third part still in the works?
Comments from author:
Unfortunately: yes. I am currently in a Real Life dilemma, and can't really focus on any of my writings at the moment...but any time I have a free second I try! -TU
Review By [Ansku] • Date [10 Nov 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 1" from Skymist
My goodness.. I spent about 6 hours last night and another 2 hours today reading both parts of this story.. and wishing there were more now *chuckle*

You certainly have a wonderful writing style.. just drew me right in within the first chapter or 2.. and I never thought of Dawn and Spike in that light before. Nice change. And I adored the Mythology additions and twists, always been fascinated by those kinda of things.

Hope you eventually get around to adding a 3rd chapter to this trilogy. Looking forward to it.
Comments from author:
Wow, I'm blushing from the high praise! It really took you eight hours to read all that? I didn't quite realize how long it would take...which will make it fun when I need to reread all that to write the third part.

As for *writing* the third part: that's gonna take a little while yet. I'm currently caught up in the alternate version of Immortality's Gift. I'm in the process of writing the next part of that, and (unfortunately) that has precedence right now.

Hopefully next year I'll be finished with ImmGiftAlt, and begin planning/writing the final part of my trilogy.
I hope that what I'm working on now (as well as any other previous works I have) will tide you over until then.

Your Author,
Twilight Unicorn: The Vampiric Unicorn
Review By [Skymist] • Date [9 Oct 07] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 28" from spk
WOW! I am in awe of the intracacies of this series. I am desperately hoping that the final chapter of the trilogy will be posted soon?! :)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. Sadly, the final story is on hold until I finish the outline for it/ImmGiftAlt gets done...whichever comes first. All I can say is to be patient, and it will eventually happen!
Review By [spk] • Date [20 May 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 28" from SarahADavid
Amazing story!!!
Can't wait for more parts of the series.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. As for the final story in this trilogy, that's currently on hold until I finish Immortality's Gift (The Alternate Version), or until I get some inspiration.
Review By [SarahADavid] • Date [8 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 28" from AriaDragoncrest
Can't wait for the last part. Hopefully you'll start posting it soon. I promise to do lots of reviews for it!
Comments from author:
I'll start posting sometime in the near future. I can't promise any more than that, but it WILL happen!
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [29 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 28" from (Past Donor)Methos
gotta say wow, got this fic reccomended by a friend so i thought i'd try it out.
the way you mest the worlds of buffy and highlander together are perfect.
loved the part about methos being shown bits of the buffy 'cannon' history so he would know which side to choose.
one thing i would love to have cleared up (don't know if your in the process of tis or not so ignore me if you are) is where did the swords come from?
not much else... loved yur fic and please keep on writing

Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. As to your question: I hadn't thought of that, but now that you've brought it to my attention, I'll see what I can do! Hopefully, I'll have something out soon. I'm kinda swamped with Real Life at the moment.
Review By [(Past Donor)Methos] • Date [30 Nov 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 28" from chajalive
It is now 2am and I have been reading your story in four hours straight. While it is nice to go to bed now, I would have loved to reach the end. I just hope you will continue the story soon, so that my curiosity and impatience can be calmed.
Thanks anyways for writing this fabulous story.
Comments from author:
Wow. That's just: wow. I'm honored that you read it straight through, and pleased as well. I'm in the process of outlining the third story at the moment, and will hopefully be writing it soon.
Review By [chajalive] • Date [19 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 27" from VillageOrchid
I'm enjoying your long, complex story.

I think some of the characters are too powerful for a clear, compelling narrative, but I'm enjoying your demonstration of personality -- extrapolation into an AU future fic for Willow, for Oz, for Tara, for Methos, for Dawn, for Joe, and for Giles. Xander a little to passive until recently, but certainly a lot of characters and plot lines to follow. Rave has some potential as an original character, but the presense of Wes, Fred, Bethany and Gwen are less defined. Granted they're in the story less, but they come across more like chess pieces than characters with motivation. Spike, Buffy, Cordy and Angel better defined than Wes.. but still come across as less interesting to me.

I really liked how you dramtized the effects of an untold tale of Amanda spilling the beens on "the Ancient one's" name. As after in an earlier part of your saga, Adam was so careful... and later it is taken for granted that they all know he's Methos.

I really enjoyed your original extrapolations of mythology.

Looking forward to seeing where you are taking this, Dawn's ending the game is only one foreshadowed element. I expect there'll be more surprises to come.
Comments from author:
Complex is definitely the word for it! And I agree with you on the characterization. Some characters in this story were brand new, while others I've done before, and some that I've never really attempted until now. It's been challenging, to say the least!

My bringing mythology into the story is a trademark of mine. I attempt to do it in every story, since it's so interesting and under appreciated by many...and put a twist in it.

As for where this trilogy is going: you'll just have to wait and see!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 May 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 27" from (Recent Donor)NotAGoauld
Umm Loving this story... but somehow you ended up w/ 2 ch. 26's and no end. End please??? *****Bats brown eyes anime style and pouts.******
Comments from author:
Oops, sorry! Didn't mean to do that. I'll delete the extra part shortly, and the end of the story isn't quite written yet. It will be soon, though.

Review By [(Recent Donor)NotAGoauld] • Date [23 May 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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