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Review of chapter "20" from jgoodman
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Comments from author:
I will as soon as I can, still piecing things together from the computer crashes. Yes, plural. *sigh*

Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [25 Jun 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from Drakan
love this story...though i hate how i get so addicted and then have to WAIT for additional chapters, lol
Comments from author:
LOL I can relate, but hey, at least my muse is now WORKING on this one with me. I'm doing chapter 21 now, right now and will work on it again in the morning. Have to admit, it's going off on a bit of a tangent at the moment, but at least I'm still in the same universe AND Roswell. LOL
Review By [Drakan] • Date [1 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from CageFire
Hmm, pretty interesting story. I only watched roswell off and on, so I don't remember everything, but I do remember enough to understand. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you and I am trying. Already have a good 6 pages on the next chapter. Will post when I hit 10. I write in size 14 font these days. I need new glasses! *wailing now* ;)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from Blackguard
Wow, did not expect this to be updated. Glad to see that I was wrong.

I am most interested in what's happening with Maria, I am guess Charmed style witch, but could be wrong. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
I'm determined to finish it and get G&H part II posted eventually. :)

Yep, but the Charmed Ones will be absent from this fic. *g*

Glad you seem to have liked it and I'll post more as soon as I have it. *vbg*
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [15 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from Bumpkin
Woot! Maria is a witch, that is so cool and I can totally see it. But man, it kinda sucks that it means again that Xander is again the only one without a power of some kind in the group he has surrounded himself with (well other than the 'rents, who like Joyce are just 'super' at understanding ppls)

Looking forward to seeing Maria get back into the group and having the others kick themselves for not realizing something outside was influencing her - specially Kyle since he was good and whammied by Tess in the past and it lost them Alex.

Hope to see more of this sooner rather than later,
Comments from author:
Don't feel too bad for Xander. Maybe he'll model himself after Joyce in being more understanding. *g*

Honestly, I saw Tess as heavy handed in the extreme and got the impression from what little we got to see of Ava that she was more experienced as well as more empathetic towards people. So I'm thinking Ava is more capable of a certain finesse in her work than Tess ever could have dreamed. That being said, have you "seen" any signs that Maria is being mindwarped like Tess would have done it? Is what's happening even really like what Tess did in canon? Think about that one for a bit. ;)

Oh yeah, thanks bunches for that review. I really appreciate it. :):):)
Review By [Bumpkin] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from LMiC
Get 'em puppy! Good girl. You already know I want more, but I'm saying it again (most anxiously, because I haven't seen these spoilers, dang it.) ;)
Comments from author:
I'm so sorry, guess I should have talked it over with you sooner. I promise to let you know the spoilers first next time. ;)

Yeah, Raksha is going to be FUN to play with. *vbg*
Review By [LMiC] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "20" from RevDorothyL
I'm thrilled that you're back to updating this story, and I didn't notice any proof-reading errors or anything like that. Nice twist, giving Alan's family a 'witchy' heritage (of the good variety, a la "Charmed" I'm thinking?). And seeing Raksha the cuddly demon dog dispose of a sadistic 'skin' so neatly was a pure pleasure. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for that review! I also appreciate you saying I didn't leave anything to correct, you're sweet. *g*

Yeah, I had people bugging me to give Maria powers, but I'd already sent Max back to Antar and didn't know how I'd give her any until I thought of Charmed and powers bound while the kid was little. The actual Charmed Ones will NOT be making any appearances though. *chuckle*

Raksha is going to be VERY helpful to the DeLuca's and they will also be helpful to her, down the road a bit.

Thanks again for being my first reviewer of the new chapter. I was beginning to think people were only going to look at it and not review. *chuckle*
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [10 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Jobi
Love the story so far, hope u continue it at some point.
Comments from author:
That's the plan and I just found another snippet of it that I thought had been lost, so maybe that will stimulate the muse. Here's hoping anyway. *g*

Edited to add: Another chapter is up.
Review By [Jobi] • Date [15 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from RevDorothyL
Here's hoping you'll be inspired to write that sequel someday! :)

I adore Xander and Michael getting the supportive family they always needed, and Liz getting a chance to develop her powers without the Max-drama, perhaps.
Comments from author:
Thanks and I'll try.

Exactly, I always thought the guys needed that too.

*chuckle* Yeah, the Max-drama was a BIT much, wasn't it?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [23 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Blackett
It is indeed an interesting story. I hope there will be more soonish. I'm hoping for a happy ending for everyone involved...even the ones not present. But anyhow it is your story so I guess is going to be how you want it to be. *grins*
Comments from author:
Not so much with the "soonish" as I'm sure you've already guessed, but I'm definitely NOT giving up on this story. And I like happy endings too. *grinning back*
Review By [Blackett] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Jonathan
i recently just discorered this. such a great fic, and I would love for you to conitnue it. so please do. there's not enough xander/roswell fics.
Comments from author:
Why than you, I am trying. :)
Review By [Jonathan] • Date [24 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from Kirallie
More soon please!!!!
Comments from author:
*vbg* Aw, thanks for the review and I'll try, really I will. :)
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [15 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Xander Nightengale" from sunrise
Oh yay! Anyway, I like the build, hope to see more of this caring Xander in the future :)
Comments from author:
*vbg* Thanks for the review!
Review By [sunrise] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Roswell or Bust" from sunrise
Roswell was one of my all time favorites, and this is just awesome as you include Xander. Can't wait to read the rest!
Comments from author:
I hope I haven't disappointed you since you wrote this. I'm constantly trying to rewrite what was lost to fit the pieces of the fic I still have. (Thanks again to my best friend who kept them on her computer in a file.)
Review By [sunrise] • Date [1 Jul 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 19" from (Past Donor)severuswinchester
I really enjoyed reading this story and am glad that you wrote it. You wrote the alternative to what could have happened had Liz and the others not been in time to stop the others from leaving quite believably and added in Xander to the mix quite well. If you get the desire to write more, I am interested in reading. Mahalo.
Comments from author:
I finally wrote more. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [24 Jun 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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