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Review of chapter "A familiar face" from Blackguard
Review:
this is getting better and better, and is there hintings of X/Liz, if so that would be awesome
Comments from author:
Thank you! Ah, Xander does have feelings for Liz, but he's not ready to go there yet in his conscious mind and we all know she's still stuck on Max, so there will be no fireworks for them... yet. ;)
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [8 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A familiar face" from CPTSkip
Review:
This is an excellent story. I'm sorry I haven't commented on it before. You are doing a very good job with everyones' characters and you are very good with the banter. I really hope you let Michael dust Spike. And don't forget Liz has some alien powers from Max bringing her back to life so she should be able to dust a few Skins on her own. I look forward to more of your lovely story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the lovely compliments! Don't worry, I'm not forgetting about Liz's powers, but she's gonna need some training in them first. She'll use them to good purpose eventually, I promise. *vbg*
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [8 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A familiar face" from JayCee
Review:
This only gets a five due to the fact you left it on too much of a cliffhanger. I want to see spike get his ass kicked. Though I still wouldn't have given more than a 8 even if you didn't leave it on a cliffhanger due to the story not completed. I do LOVE this story and look forward to more. They are tooooooooo short. Xander, Xander ...Xander he is my fave....JC
Comments from author:
You punish writers for leaving you with a cliffhanger? Hm, that's a new one on me. *shrugs*

Xander is lots of fun to write. I'm sorry you didn't get to see Spike get his butt kicked, but eventually he's gonna get paid back for the trouble he's caused, don't worry. *g*
Review By [JayCee] • Date [8 Jul 06] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11 New Diggs" from Blackguard
Review:
the really fast update was cool, although the kyle in trouble bit is not that appealing. However this was a great chapter and i like the fact that your making micheal embrace his human half more.
Comments from author:
*wince* And my attempt at a cliffhanger falls flat. Ouch!

That was one of the things I loved about the otherwise sucky season 3 of the show. Michael becoming more accessible to everyone around him and less the "stone wall" guy who kept everyone but Max and Isabel further away than arms reach. I figured Xander could be the start to that whole scenario.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [2 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10 Keeping in touch" from Blackguard
Review:
I can't wait till spike gets to Roswell and gets his ass kicked by micheal. Great so far, keep up the good work
Comments from author:
LOL I might have to rewrite that scene a bit now, just for you. *vbg*
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [2 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10 Keeping in touch" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Some interesting twists. Thanks for continuing the story!
Comments from author:
You're welcome and I hope you like the twists, because there will be more that are significant for the continuing of the story in a second fic later on.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Another secret revealed" from Sadfru
Review:
thank god, I don't mind the homey family scenes but I would much rather violence...it is a mental illness I enjoy :)
Comments from author:
Hm, are you female by any chance? I have a guy friend who'd be perfect for you. ;) *vbg*

Well, there will probably be more homey family scenes than action ones, but believe me when I say there will be plenty of violence later. How do you feel about angst?
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [26 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Another secret revealed" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Thanks for continuing the story so soon.
Comments from author:
Your welcome. I hope you liked the chapter too though. I'm sorry if you didn't and wish you'd tell me if you didn't.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Another secret revealed" from Blackguard
Review:
and the plot thickens, please write more soon
Comments from author:
*chuckle* Okay. *g*
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9 Another secret revealed" from KingHenrytheV
Review:
Neat little bit. I have to admit, not to familiar with Roswell, but I'm curious where this is going ... will Xander relocate if he has another "battle" to fight? Any future chemistry with the local chars?
Comments from author:
Xander has, as of now at least, relocated. He's got a huge debt to repay, after all and doesn't like to shirk his responsibilities. Everyone back in Sunnydale is acting like they're getting along fine without him, just missing him is all. (Yes, not being shown yet in the story, but you know he's not going to stay incommunicado from his friends back home.)

You'll see what chemistry he has with local characters soon enough, just keep reading. Okay? *g*
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [25 Jun 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 Acceptance" from LMiC
Review:
Even though I'm totally spoiled on this one I still love reading the finished product. Please post more as your muse and RL allow. ;)
Review By [LMiC] • Date [22 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 Acceptance" from ThunderGod
Review:
I like this..and can't wait to see where it goes..Xander went further than he thought on his road trip this time:}

ThunderGod
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [22 Jun 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 Acceptance" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I enjoyed this happy moment - a good story beat ending and leaving room for some new beginnings.
Thanks for continuing the tale!
Comments from author:
Well it's not over yet, no worries there. I really hope I continue to hold everyone's attention with this story. *g*

Thank you very much for your review. :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 Acceptance" from Blackguard
Review:
this just keeps getting better and better, now i am wondering what a town like roswell will have in store for Xander, will it be alien chicks instead of demon chicks always after him i wonder?
Comments from author:
Worse. Think of Maria on a matchmaking kick and then pity poor Xander who's about to learn that dating regular girls can be almost as bad as dating demons. *snicker*

Honestly, the first date will be briefly recounted by Xander in the fic, but I was wondering if I should write the second disaster date out in excruciating detail. I'll take votes on this matter, so make yourselves heard now, okay? *giggle*
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [22 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8 Acceptance" from Sadfru
Review:
seems to be smooth sailing...wheres the Iceburg??? :) and if Liz didn't make it doesn't he fall into the trap that was set for him by his 'wife'?
Comments from author:
LOL There does always seem to be one, doesn't there? Even in a desert down like Roswell, New Mexico. *still chuckling* The "iceberg" as you put it is still the problem with the Skins. When and where will they strike next? Why are they after Liz? These questions (and yours) will be hinted at and eventually answered further down the road in the story. :)
Review By [Sadfru] • Date [22 Jun 06] • Not Rated
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