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Review of chapter "Prologue" from SADDAMINSANE
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Slayers working for the President this could be interesting.
Review By [SADDAMINSANE] • Date [6 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from CPTSkip
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OK, you have definitely got my imagination by the gonads. I hope you write more to this story, and quickly, as I really want to hear what the President's plans are. I think you need to add a disclaimer, but other than that, this is just super. Thanks for the fun.
Comments from author:
disclaimer added.. I forgot.. bad me.... working on it, trying to decide where to end chapter 2 at the moment.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from alexceasar
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This should prove very interesting. You got me all curious about what his plan is gonna be and who is gonna be on the team. I like the Jack Ryan character. Good job on hooking me in.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [5 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from JoeB
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So far I'm liking this A lot.

Your conversations are a little rough, but I enjoyed it immensely
Comments from author:
Can you give me some details on the roughness of the conversations, dialogue tends to be rather difficult for me to write in character.
Review By [JoeB] • Date [5 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from KaCee
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Sweet! Looking forward to more. Love the Jack Ryan books. . . . will we see a bit of John Clark and Ding also?
Comments from author:
Yep.. Rainbow Six on the way... with a bad girl going there... ~grins~
Review By [KaCee] • Date [5 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from cwolf
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Considering I have no idea who Buffy is being crossed with... if it's a tv show, book, shadow puppet....
Comments from author:
you want the surprise ruined? I will say LOTS of crosses both books and TV.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [5 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from spk
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Oh...you definitely have my attention and my interest. This is such an intriguing and innovative idea. I can't wait to see where this story goes. :)
Comments from author:
can we say crossovers ad nauseum???? I have like six chapters just with the training... ~rolls eyes~ I am a masochist... that is the only explaination.
Review By [spk] • Date [5 Jun 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Past Donor)Osirus
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Glad to see this posted here. Does this mean we'll get to see more soon?
Comments from author:
pretty soon, trying to stay one chapter ahead of what I post, so as soon as I am finished with Chapter 2, I will post chapter 1, and so on... makes it easier for me to keep continunity errors down to a minimum.
Review By [(Past Donor)Osirus] • Date [5 Jun 06] • Not Rated
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