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Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from desartartt
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this is going to be fun. Does Xander meet the Helsing organization?
Review By [desartartt] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from Elleria
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More soon please!!!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from kizunakat
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ok I am getting a definate hellsing vibe here. love the "what? what did I do". kizuna
Review By [kizunakat] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
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Wow, what an exciting beginning! I can't wait to see more.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from Questara
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Dang, I have to say you've caught my interest, at the very least. Go Xander, and the bit with the sword was great!
Review By [Questara] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from Rogue
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I have been reading each of the new stories you have posted and while I have enjoyed them this one by far is the best of the lot. I am really looking forward to the cotinuation of the story.

Rogue
Review By [Rogue] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from NoLifeKing
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Fascinating start. Seems he made a lasting impression to the Queen. *grin*
I'm looking forward how it will get to Xander/Integra.
One thing as I'm german: What is "cold cocked him"? Did he shot the vamp in the brain with the dropped firearm?
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from KingHenrytheV
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Seven for the last couple o' sentences or so. I thought that was a bit silly. Otherwise, it's off to an interesting start ... maybe because I'm not 18 anymore, I'd like to see Xander age a bit before any X/I starts floating around. I like where this story might head ... Xander is one of those characters with more potential than he was allowed in the series (because the show is about female empowerment and redemption). It's good to seem him move into his own.
Review By [KingHenrytheV] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from kaleecat
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Extremely interesting start - a few rough spots with spelling and awkward wording though. Giles' insistence on taking care of Xander & his wardrobe, as well as the threat to the men was amusing. I also like how you describe Xander's reactions, he's taking things seriously but also very much himself at this time in the series. Its ends on a suitably cliffhanger note.

A few suggestions... You shouldn't assume your readers know the crossover, most authors do that but if you want the uninitiated to try a story you should give a little background, or a link to find it, as to the 'Hellsing" universe.

Also, in your header please spell out exactly who this "I" is in the relationship of "X/I".
If "I" is female please add the warning of Het with Xander/OFC or something similar.
If "I" is male, then please indicate the warning appropriately.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from ObsidianDragon
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Great first chapter, please add more soon, I can't wait to read what everyones reaction was for, and what happens next to Xander.
Review By [ObsidianDragon] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from Lucinda
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giggle... first, Xander placing an urgent call to Giles to interpret 'Brit-speak' and the Giles-reaction to WHY...

The suit forming around Xander was an interesting image as well. Okay, it was being tailored into existence around him by a small sworm of staff, but still.

And the final moments with the attack (surely that will leave a black mark on his record!) and the sword...

PLEASE continue this fic - I look forward to seeing what will happen next.
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from (Recent Donor)tammin
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Good start so far. At first I thought that Xander was going to be a Hellsing, so good job with the misdirection there. The other thing it this a Xander/Integra fic. Any way please keep up the AWESOME work.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from HolyKnight
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Well....THAT...was a espectacular presentation to the Queen indeed......

and someone is laughing his arse in the background?
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from Ladeia
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lol... Way too funny. Hurry back with more. Want to know more about what Xander will be doing.
Review By [Ladeia] • Date [24 Jun 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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