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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from canadiangodess
Review:
Loving this!! Update as soon as possibile!!
Review By [canadiangodess] • Date [21 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from UniilaDellaLuna
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love the story so far. hehe, cute, love the fact that bufyy got over the hype must be mom stage....that was buggie
Review By [UniilaDellaLuna] • Date [21 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)LadyJ
Review:
please update! Now all we need is dead (or not so dead) body!
Review By [(Recent Donor)LadyJ] • Date [20 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SheWhoReads
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I'm enjoying this. It's very cute so far!

I'm looking forward to seeing how Eliot deals with the Slayer stuff. Somehow I don't think he'll take it very well.
Review By [SheWhoReads] • Date [20 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I am still really liking this story. Looking forward to more.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bugeyedmonster
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OH, HOW DARE YOU! I'm reading this fic and I don't even watch L&O:SVU. I so don't need another fandom. But I find myself wanting to know how Elliot will react to finding out about Faith's past. And can't you just picture Xander, Faith, Willow and Spike threatening Elliot with bodily harm if he hurts Buffy? How would Elliot respond to Giles if he sees Giles being "Ripper"?

And we KNOW that Elliot just jinxed things with that statement. Something will happen.

More please.

(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from war
Review:
very well written family scene.you got me almost believing they could related.good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from buffyaddict
Review:
Who is older Johnny Depp or Elliot?
Who is older Johnny Depp or Giles?
Review By [buffyaddict] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Chaos
Review:
You know that by adding all the Angel, Romeo and Juliet stuff makes me want to have Angel come down from LA and pay Buffy a visit while she's with Elliot. Even better, Angel comes first, and faces the very overprotective father by himself, then Spike and Faith come down. I can completely picture it; Angel somewhat scaring Elliot (he isn't going to act like a 28 year old boy, but a 200 something man), then Spike with his lovely language of 'bugger' 'poofter', 'bloody' and my favorite, 'magnificent poof'. Then we have Faith, who has been in jail for murder, and is not afraid of showing her sexuality. No more needs to be said.

Please tell me you were setting up the story to introduce Angel, Spike, and Faith into it! It would be amazing, and absolutely hilarious/angsty, depending which route you take.
Review By [Chaos] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Chosenfire
Review:
Everything hmmm? That would take forever and no one would believe. I love this story. You never saw much of Elliots family on the show and you write them really well. So are like Dawn and Maureens twins or something, whats the deal. I love this story and please update soon.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CousinMary
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This is really good. I love that Elizabeth is a mini-Buffy!

BTW *holding up a bribe of a chocolate nature* If by some chance you let Goren get a look at Buffy that'd be real good. Just a though ;-)
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
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You have an outstanding tallent for dialog and characterization. Even with very little action, this is turning into one of my favorite stories. I love the bonding going on between Maureen and Dawn and the fact they have the same birthday. I can't wait for Buffy to start spilling some of her real secrets. Please keep writing this lovely story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from spk
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Great job so far! You did an amazing job with the first meeting here. I love the way that you wrote Buffy's character and nice twist with Dawn being Maureen's twin. Can't wait to read more...oh what an interesting shopping experience that will be... :)
Review By [spk] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Celia
Review:
So I wasn't exactly over joyed when I saw the shows you were going to cross - and yet I was. I love the Law and Order: SVU show (the ONLY L&O show I can stand) and I love Buffy. Should be fun to see someone writing a cross, right? Wrong... I've read some SVU/Buffy stuff and most of the time it just doesn't work. SVU is so firmly based in reality that crossing the two are almost impossible. But I most often at least try the first part of a story even if I am unsure of how it's going to be.

And I am glad that I did try this! It was such a pleasant surprise to what I was expecting... I think you've got a good handle this story :D I find myself more and more intrigued and looking forward to a new chapter. The way that you've so far concentrated on Buffy "the person" meeting the Stablers is a really interesting read and lays the groundwork for bringing in more of Buffy's world if that is the way you are going.

I tend to agree with some of the reviews saying that sharing her Angel history at this point in time seems slightly off. But since I loved how Dawn got Maureen to talk about boys, as well as the Buffy-Dawn interaction whilst talking about Angel I'm choosing to go with it *s*

Looking forward to more of this story. (can we bribe you to write faster? *g*)
Review By [Celia] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from carmsfic
Review:
Great chapter. I love the interactions between the siblings. Please post more soon.
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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