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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from SheWhoReads
Review:
I'm enjoying this. It's very cute so far!

I'm looking forward to seeing how Eliot deals with the Slayer stuff. Somehow I don't think he'll take it very well.
Review By [SheWhoReads] • Date [20 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
I am still really liking this story. Looking forward to more.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bugeyedmonster
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OH, HOW DARE YOU! I'm reading this fic and I don't even watch L&O:SVU. I so don't need another fandom. But I find myself wanting to know how Elliot will react to finding out about Faith's past. And can't you just picture Xander, Faith, Willow and Spike threatening Elliot with bodily harm if he hurts Buffy? How would Elliot respond to Giles if he sees Giles being "Ripper"?

And we KNOW that Elliot just jinxed things with that statement. Something will happen.

More please.

(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from war
Review:
very well written family scene.you got me almost believing they could related.good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from buffyaddict
Review:
Who is older Johnny Depp or Elliot?
Who is older Johnny Depp or Giles?
Review By [buffyaddict] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Chaos
Review:
You know that by adding all the Angel, Romeo and Juliet stuff makes me want to have Angel come down from LA and pay Buffy a visit while she's with Elliot. Even better, Angel comes first, and faces the very overprotective father by himself, then Spike and Faith come down. I can completely picture it; Angel somewhat scaring Elliot (he isn't going to act like a 28 year old boy, but a 200 something man), then Spike with his lovely language of 'bugger' 'poofter', 'bloody' and my favorite, 'magnificent poof'. Then we have Faith, who has been in jail for murder, and is not afraid of showing her sexuality. No more needs to be said.

Please tell me you were setting up the story to introduce Angel, Spike, and Faith into it! It would be amazing, and absolutely hilarious/angsty, depending which route you take.
Review By [Chaos] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Chosenfire
Review:
Everything hmmm? That would take forever and no one would believe. I love this story. You never saw much of Elliots family on the show and you write them really well. So are like Dawn and Maureens twins or something, whats the deal. I love this story and please update soon.
Review By [Chosenfire] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CousinMary
Review:
This is really good. I love that Elizabeth is a mini-Buffy!

BTW *holding up a bribe of a chocolate nature* If by some chance you let Goren get a look at Buffy that'd be real good. Just a though ;-)
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
Review:
You have an outstanding tallent for dialog and characterization. Even with very little action, this is turning into one of my favorite stories. I love the bonding going on between Maureen and Dawn and the fact they have the same birthday. I can't wait for Buffy to start spilling some of her real secrets. Please keep writing this lovely story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from spk
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Great job so far! You did an amazing job with the first meeting here. I love the way that you wrote Buffy's character and nice twist with Dawn being Maureen's twin. Can't wait to read more...oh what an interesting shopping experience that will be... :)
Review By [spk] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Celia
Review:
So I wasn't exactly over joyed when I saw the shows you were going to cross - and yet I was. I love the Law and Order: SVU show (the ONLY L&O show I can stand) and I love Buffy. Should be fun to see someone writing a cross, right? Wrong... I've read some SVU/Buffy stuff and most of the time it just doesn't work. SVU is so firmly based in reality that crossing the two are almost impossible. But I most often at least try the first part of a story even if I am unsure of how it's going to be.

And I am glad that I did try this! It was such a pleasant surprise to what I was expecting... I think you've got a good handle this story :D I find myself more and more intrigued and looking forward to a new chapter. The way that you've so far concentrated on Buffy "the person" meeting the Stablers is a really interesting read and lays the groundwork for bringing in more of Buffy's world if that is the way you are going.

I tend to agree with some of the reviews saying that sharing her Angel history at this point in time seems slightly off. But since I loved how Dawn got Maureen to talk about boys, as well as the Buffy-Dawn interaction whilst talking about Angel I'm choosing to go with it *s*

Looking forward to more of this story. (can we bribe you to write faster? *g*)
Review By [Celia] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from carmsfic
Review:
Great chapter. I love the interactions between the siblings. Please post more soon.
Review By [carmsfic] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AnnOfMidnight
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Oh!!! I loved this chapter. I was almost squeeing. I can't wait to see how the family mixes and how Dawn fits into things. I think Dawn and Buffy would be grateful for the parenting because it would remind them of their caring mother. And I can't wait for Stabler to do some background checking on everyone and blow a gasket. Poor him, whatever's not classified will surely raise some eyebrows. And Dawn being his daughter is going to be a major shocker, since he totally never had sex with Joyce to conceive her, and he probably won't find out about the mystical beforehand.

I did read a review that talks about the Angel stuff coming out of nowhere and it kind of did. I don't think she's thinking about him when she wakes up (although maybe when she goes to bed) but I sort of let it slide. I don't know why she would share it with everyone though. Is she in counselling (actually, that would be pretty funny)?

Thanks for the update! Hope you stay inspired.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from mrpage
Review:
Good chapter. Loved the 'bible study' cover-up. Can't wait for more.
Review By [mrpage] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from eponine
Review:
I'll admit I was origionally slightly wary about this story- there aren't many good SVU crossovers. The two shows aren't easily mixed, mostly because their stylistically very different. However, I'm really starting to enjoy this fic. You're doing a good job at bringing Buffy and Dawn into the family, and the SVU side of things has a more "season one" feel to it that really makes things work. I'm very much looking foreward to more, and I've added you to my favorites so I'll know when it's up!
Review By [eponine] • Date [19 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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