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Review of chapter "I Guess We're Staying." from MistDragon
Review:
I enjoyed the whole thing and would love to see this one made into a longer story. Thank you, MD.
Comments from author:
I guess we're staying is next on my todo list. I'm looking forward to it.
Review By [MistDragon] • Date [2 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't go into the cemetary" from PsychoWing
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Most of these are very amusing (can't say all since the Medium one obviously wasn't). You've done a great job.

Quick question/observation - you don't like Director Jenny Sheppard, do you? Which, by the way, I love Dawn's chewing out of her. (Makes me a little curious what Xander would have said in the same situation though - I'd wonder about Faith too, but she might be inclined just to punch the Director.)

Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [4 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Don't go into the cemetary" from Caliadragon
Review:
Coolness! I really like this story.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [11 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Don't go into the cemetary" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Nice for Allison to have her warning taken seriously the first time, right up front, with no muss and no fuss, for a change!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Don't go into the cemetary" from headingout
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Clever crossover idea, and very entertaining to read. Thanks!
Review By [headingout] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Here to see Gibbs" from (Past Donor)TraceyC
Review:
This is good, but some of the punctuation disappeared in the beginning of the story - apostrophes and periods missing, etc...

Thanks - I like your three series, and you write with a lot of heart in your stories.

T
Review By [(Past Donor)TraceyC] • Date [8 Apr 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In trouble in D.C." from Greywizard
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LMAO reading this latest chapter. ;-)

Loved the casual way they made themselves at home in Mannion's office, and they definitely showed class by asking the chief what kind of pizza he wanted before ordering. ;-)

Especially liked the way Giles advised Mannion not to punish the other prisoners by putting the Scoobies in with them. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [26 Mar 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In trouble in D.C." from RevDorothyL
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Most stylish and party-like response to being arrested I've ever read (and I particularly appreciate the fact that they intended from the start to share their pizza with the Chief).
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Mar 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In trouble in D.C." from (Past Donor)wozwashi
Review:
chuckle chuckle snort

great
Review By [(Past Donor)wozwashi] • Date [25 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paintball Match" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice job on the chapters, I hope you'll be adding more soon.
Ever consider using "N.C.I.S."?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [7 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paintball Match" from RevDorothyL
Review:
What fun!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 Feb 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paintball Match" from azulkan
Review:
ROFLMAO great chapter.
Review By [azulkan] • Date [2 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Security Service" from (Recent Donor)LordMesron
Review:
I am so loving all of your stories. The way you effortlessly mix the various shows together is great, and the humor is awesome.

Please keep on writing and posting.
Review By [(Recent Donor)LordMesron] • Date [22 Jan 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Guess We're Staying." from RevDorothyL
Review:
Jim's a blood relative of Dawn's? Okay, now you HAVE to tell me more, and how, and when, and what this means for Dawn and Buffy as well as for Jim and Blair.

Provocative stuff, and I particularly appreciated Dawn's therapeutic bedside manner with the injured junior Slayer, keeping the other girl's spirits up no matter how dire the danger.
Comments from author:
As soon as Dawn's New Job is finished I will continue with Jim as blood relative to Dawn.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Guess We're Staying." from starchild
Review:
You absolutely have to continue this into its own story. I like "Road Trip" and your style of writing. So, a relative? Who will it be? Please continue :-)
Review By [starchild] • Date [4 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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