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Review of chapter "Chapter Three: Loud Without A Sound" from leelaa
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Dawn shrugged, feeling as if she had done something wrong, but knowing that wasn't it. She wasn't a whiner, she wasn't going to mope about the small stuff when things like lives and evil were on the line. Just like Buffy never... Okay, so Buffy whined, but she whined while saving everyone, and that was a productive sort of whine. Dawn shook her head to rid herself of that train of thought.
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Love the writing, both the way Dawn thinks and the story introducing the element of her telepathy here.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: Under the Lights" from leelaa
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It hadn't occurred to her to refuse, and that realization sent a chill down Dawn's spine. She was a teenager, for heaven's sake! Refusing to do what she was told was like her hallmark.
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SNORT. GRIN. LOL.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from leelaa
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Dawn stayed frozen. The terror was back with its knife-blade against her tongue. She knew, now, that she was going to die. *Does getting shot hurt?*
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Superb.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from Feygan
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Hey, I just wanted to take this opportunity to say that I really like this story. Thank you.
Review By [Feygan] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from leelaa
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Absolutely superb. But it's been so so SO LONG since an update. Please, please update this soon. I think I've read all your stories here, at your site and at LJ. And when I say that, I mean that when I come by any of your stories anywhere, I drop everything to have another read.
I've been checking in on this story and 'If You Go Into The Woods', 'Inevitable', 'Physics of the Spin' and 'Switchback' for ages, in hopes there might be an update this time or the next time or... They're all simply too good to be abandoned, & I'm scared that you seem to have utterly done just that. Please don't do that. Coax the muses back out of hiding and update soon. Please.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [21 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from DearestDrusilla
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So when is the sequel coming about? I want Little Dawnie to be a teenager again, like, super soonish if thats cool with you?

Additionally, I seriously adore this series you've made. It's well written and you didn't turn Dawn into a superpowerful badass or a completely weak she-girl.

Also, I sort of read this before I started reading Anita Blake, lol, but congrats, you have me wanting to invest in the series.
Review By [DearestDrusilla] • Date [2 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from CronosKitty
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Are you EVER going to finish this? .. A really good story I hate to see it abandoned. You write really good stories but it seems you hardly ever finish them. I think before I read any more of your stories Ill wait to see if its finished first. That way i dont have to wait years for an ending that never seems to come. :(
Review By [CronosKitty] • Date [7 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from yakuit
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Hi, just one of your many many many fans - just to let you know this story kicks ass

xx
Review By [yakuit] • Date [5 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from SpacedCadet
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Its been years!

Please update, I want to know how this comes out.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [27 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from draconis
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Can the author please clear up the status of this story?

It says 'end of part one' at the bottom of item14, but its status is listed as NOT complete.

It seems like this particular story IS complete, and all the remaining stories in the series are listed as complete. It suggests this story too should be categorized as complete, however from past experience I've tried to learn to never assume I know for sure what's going on in the minds of authors here at tthfanfic.

Thanks.
Review By [draconis] • Date [17 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from (Past Donor)Laney
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I've said it before and I'll say it again, this is truly my favourite story. I think one of the hardest thing about writing fics where a character has reversed in age is capturing voice and Dawn at five is just too bloody cute. Absolutely perfect. I think this fic is tied with Inevitable for my fave fanfics.
Review By [(Past Donor)Laney] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from laoshi
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I think I’ve got to begin by making an apology I’ve had this story on my recs list for ages and I’m only now getting around to reviewing it.

I’m not quite sure why you feel the need to tell us Doc manages to take Buffy with him when he falls off the tower, but I guess it’s better to ere on the side of caution.
I like the line She was the Slayer's sister and that meant she had to be stronger than she knew.
Dawn’s emergence into the graveyard and meeting with Anita is extraordinarily well written and you’ve more than earned the mega angst award. In fact I’m not sure mega is an adequate superlative. I’d go so far as plundering other languages. Uber maybe? Anyway you did a wonderful job of portraying Dawn’s fear and confusion and her initial suspicion of Anita. Claudia’s initial suspicion of Dawn was a nice touch. The pacing was spot on. I thoroughly enjoyed the beginning of this story.

I don’t know whether you want readers to point out typos or not but here’s one: Did she survive her fall? How abut Spike? Willow? Xander?
Review By [laoshi] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from Obsidian
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awesome story. very heat warming and sad at the same time. I like it very much.
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [13 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from leelaa
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Please update this soon. While your writing is always damn good, I've been checking in on this story and 'If You Go Into The Woods', 'Inevitable' and 'Switchback' for ages, in hopes there might be an update this time or the next time or... They're all simply too good to be abandoned. Please. Please. Please.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fourteen: Family Hour" from Banditcat
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This story has only just begun. Please don't leave us hanging.
I love you writing style.
Review By [Banditcat] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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