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Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from gildedsunshine
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Wow, that was a great beginning! Interesting Dawn-voice, mixing the teenager she was with hints of the child she is. And a crazy, mixed-up and reversed feeling that must be!
Must resist temptation for a fangirl squee, cause there's no end to the Mhalachai brilliance!
Review By [gildedsunshine] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from Lilly
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nice. very nice start. I'll be looking forward to more of this. :)
Review By [Lilly] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from Crydwyn
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This is a good first chapter, you didn't leave us all on a cliffhanger and you also got started on the story!
Review By [Crydwyn] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from littleoldme
Review:
Yay! A response with Dawn. I'm so looking forward to this. I love it that Dawn is both childlike and her Dawn self. It's particularly interesting, because unlike other responses that keep the adult minds in the child bodies, Dawn wasn't an adult to begin with. A scared fifteen year old in a scared five year old's body is a surefire recipe for some interesting drama and laughs.

This is so well-written, and I love your tender Anita. I can't wait to read more. Please, please, please update soon!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Great beginning! Is Dawn going to get any extra special powers? Update soon please!
Aria
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from (Past Donor)lckybr
Review:
Oooh i like this one! PLEASE continue!
Review By [(Past Donor)lckybr] • Date [16 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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