Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from
CrydwynReview:
This is a good first chapter, you didn't leave us all on a cliffhanger and you also got started on the story!
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Crydwyn] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from
littleoldmeReview:
Yay! A response with Dawn. I'm so looking forward to this. I love it that Dawn is both childlike and her Dawn self. It's particularly interesting, because unlike other responses that keep the adult minds in the child bodies, Dawn wasn't an adult to begin with. A scared fifteen year old in a scared five year old's body is a surefire recipe for some interesting drama and laughs.
This is so well-written, and I love your tender Anita. I can't wait to read more. Please, please, please update soon!
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littleoldme] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from
AriaDragoncrestReview:
Great beginning! Is Dawn going to get any extra special powers? Update soon please!
Aria
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AriaDragoncrest] • Date [17 Jul 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: Falling From The Sky" from
lckybrReview:
Oooh i like this one! PLEASE continue!
Review By [
lckybr] • Date [16 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
