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Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Giggles::

I say option B.

::Feeds the plot bunny::

I hope you get inspired to continue this story.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [16 Jan 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from (Current Donor)softly
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Though I would like coal for Christmas, because we all know how useful coal is, I wanted to review anyway.

Maybe in vain hopes that you might update your most wonderful story!!

Please?
Review By [(Current Donor)softly] • Date [10 Dec 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from TaiYoukai
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I think you should make it a Traveler's Good Guy. He really wasn't that bad in the books, only looking after himself. Which, if you look at it right, was basically how Jean-Claude was in the beginning.
update soon

Tai
Review By [TaiYoukai] • Date [18 Nov 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from Nyvanna
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Traveller is good! that's my vote ^^ he's the only one i kinda liked from the council anyway, don't ruin it for me! :P Cool fic, more soon please, i can't wait!
Review By [Nyvanna] • Date [23 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from maneo
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Short and sweet ^_^

Don't worry I'm extremely lazy too thats why I never bother writing down my story ideas, anyways I like the Traveler he's cool so I think he should be there to warn them...

But for a price.
Review By [maneo] • Date [3 Oct 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from Keshkreature
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Lol, well, since it is cheaper than world vision... ;) I think plan B sounds fun, just 'cause it'd be a little different. Poor Nathaniel, getting in trouble for reading the big books to Willow. After all, it's really the little kids books that have frogs in them that would give her nightmares. I'm looking forward to seeing Willow meet Richard.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [2 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from Erica
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I'll for give you this time for the short chapter, just because I got an update. But don't let it happen again. Oh and I vote for option 1-Evil Earthmover after Willow.
Review By [Erica] • Date [1 Oct 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from LeahTeirnan
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liking the story
i think option B has the best potential for a better story
and just a little picky thing firstly why are they going to richard's??? he'd have to go to the circus coz of the triumvirant and secondly they killed the earthmover in book 3!!!
Review By [LeahTeirnan] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from Vld
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Anita's caring for Willow because of the way she looks makes me think of the way she treated both Buffy and Dawn in "Tear in our Cheerios". I like it. And why would the Earthmover come to town? My guess, there are two reasons for that. Either he's gonna play it like he did in the books, or he's here for Willow. Or both.
Review By [Vld] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from RosytheCat
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Err...Actually, the Earthmover was Mr. Oliver, the Caveman Vampire who could call snakes, which is how Melanie the Lamia came to live at the Circus. He was killed by Anita a couple of books before Asher showed up. You might want to re-read your books. Sorry!

-- Rosy the Cat
Review By [RosytheCat] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from VillageOrchid
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Okay, since I don't know what the Earthmover is, I'd say have it not related to Willow directly, just the incident of power surge when she arrived.

As for Richard's books -- since he's a junior high school teacher -- he might actually have lots of educational and story books... his private diaries would probably not be in the living room... but I don't know the AB-verse well enough to know if there would be adult material in the living room.

Thanks for continuing the story.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from Dawnlady
Review:
UHm, while your idea might be nice, please use another vampire.
The earthmover died a couple of books before Micah entered the picture, hell even before Nathanial or Asher entered the picture (Circus of the damned)
So he cannot be there, Try Musette - definitely enemy, the Traveller - can be friend or foe, or someone else who is still alive.

Apart from that, I like your story, I like the whole idea of the adult Scoobie in the kid body and I like the idea of the way the vampires react to her.
Review By [Dawnlady] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from grd
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Excellent chapter. I recommend doing something different....make the Earthmover trying to do some good.
Review By [grd] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from SamDragon
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I think if you mean Mr. Oliver(if memory serves that was his name)he was already destroyed by the time Micah came on the scene.If someone else then ignore the last statement.

I like the story.Hope more comes soon.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4...about Bloody Time, I know" from magik
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I love this story! It's great! I love how Willow has everyone wrapped around her finger!Please add to soon!
Review By [magik] • Date [30 Sep 06] • Not Rated
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