This is a good story. I hope that you will update soon, because I want to know what Xander does next and if he'll end up bumping into Clark anytime soon, and what he's going to do to keep Lex safe from Kal.
Review By [MistieMossflower] • Date [12 Mar 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review By [Elleria] • Date [19 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Matriarchick
Review:
Oh man, I am SO glad you've updated this. You have the makings for a really interesting story here. I love the crossover element with Batman. And I love how Kal/Clark is the villian not matter if the character is the brutal Kal or the cowardly Clark. Please, please keep writing this.
Review By [Matriarchick] • Date [16 Feb 08] • Not Rated
This is definitely interesting. Man, I got so pissed when Clark left Xander to face Lionel Luthor! Well, I can't wait to see what else happens. Thanks!
Review By [Kaien] • Date [9 Jan 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from PrincessTai
Review:
Interesting :-D I liked the idea of Xander Xavier, it added more humanity to Lex. That's very prominent in this fic. No potentially wickedly evil Lex, more lost boy.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [3 Jan 08] • Not Rated
I love it, HyenaXander saving Lex from the big bad Clark. I can't wait to see that. I adore how you wrote, especially with hyena laughing. Oh and the hug, the hug is brillant!
One complaint, you kept writing "constant" when I think you meant contestant, but I still love what you meant by it.
Comments from author:
*laughs* Thank you for beta. I didn't even notice the mistake.
I loved the hug part too:)
Review By [GACTsevil] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
oh my God.. how did i miss this update?? !! oh please please say there is more of this soon.. oh i will beg on bended knee if i must.. for the love of my poor knees if nothing else .. update.. soon.. aewnaur
Review By [aewnaur] • Date [5 Dec 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wonderful green meteor Hyena. As I was reading I had images of the Kryptonite coming out in Xander's sweet and other bodily fluids making Kal / Clark sick the next time he tried to touch him.
Nice elevator scene. The look on Lex's face must have been something else.
Will Kal be back or is he gone for good? I guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out . My life is soooo hard. ;}
GACTsevil
