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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Past Donor)merlyna
Review:
heh. Aww, little Anita is precious! I wonder if she still has mind-to-mind with JC? More, please. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)merlyna] • Date [15 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from meka
Review:
I really am an Anita fan. So please don't take this the right way when I ask you to have Buffy put "a hurtin on her". Please, just a little one. Like a pop on the lip. Just so Anita knows that she is not always head woman in change. Thanks.
P.s if you can't tell I am enjoying this. Anytime an AB x-over gets me feeling all wound up and irritated with Anita then the author is doing a great job in terms of characterization. I love Anita but her character always gets under my skin.
Comments from author:
lol, I thank kindly for your for your compliment. I'm not for sure about a 'pop on the lip' as she is technically in a 5 year old body, but... a spanking would be in order, don't you think? ~gives a sneaky smile~
Review By [meka] • Date [15 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from arkeus
Review:
Damn. Anita is really a bitch....Hope she gets a few things through her head....:/
Review By [arkeus] • Date [15 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from angrymonkey
Review:
Not bad, but Anita does seem to be wildly out of character. Despite being somewhat hard to get along with, I don't think she ever pulls a gun on someone just to make them shut up(especially someone she thinks is just a normal teen). To be honest the way you have her acting is more like the nut job cop in 'The Lunatic Cafe' then Anita.

Don't mean to be critical, I actually am enjoying the story.
Comments from author:
I admit I'm not great at the Anita characterization. Just having some fun with it. I'm glad you are liking it:)
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [15 Aug 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Trace
Review:
*giggles hysterically and falls over*
Review By [Trace] • Date [15 Aug 06] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lin
Review:
Hmm, they were kinda talking about her like she wasn't tehre...i can see Buffy doing that...but even in his shocked state i would think Giles might want to not frighten the child...well he might think she's a demon :: shrugs::
Seems like it will be pretty interesting.
Review By [Lin] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
Review:
Oh boy,I would pay to see that one. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Arjai
Review:
Other than he typical potty mouth, Anita should slowly begin to regress into a semi-childhood state. Tag her with a resentful but genuine You're-My-New-Mommy complex with one of the female characters. Willow shares the witchyness, Buffy the killer instinct, and Cordy the attitude! Giles, Xander, or Oz could be cast into the Daddy role. I like the premise. Now a little Richard, Jean-Claude or one of the other male characters would round out the story nicely. I'm truly enjoying the idea. Make it flow, it's good!
Review By [Arjai] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Mari
Review:
This could be very interesting--most of the fics you read are the other way around. That line about the headache was total Anita.

Two complaints. First: "Jean Claude and me where chained" I'm guessing you meant "were chained". Second: The comment about "what little boobs I had". If your character is Anita--which she certainly sounds like--Anita's fairly large breasted. She complains/comments about it pretty regularly in the books.
Comments from author:
Thanks for catching the mistype. I'll have to reedit it in a bit to make it match up.
Review By [(Past Donor)Mari] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
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“Will you please shut up! I have a fucking headache and your voice is getting on my last nerves!”
LMAO reading that line! This is absolutely tremendous! I certainly hope you have more of this written, because I definitely want to see more of it.

Thanks for sharing, this is priceless! ;-)
Comments from author:
dur? oh boy...~feels lightheaded~ thanks for the wonderful reviews. wow...
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CousinMary
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Beating children is wrong. That said, Buffy teaching little 'Nita a lesson would be priceless :)
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from angrymonkey
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Great to finally see a fanfic with Anita characters visiting Sunnydale.
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
Review:
I can just IMAGINE how freaked Buffy and Giles must be with a cursing, gun-toting five year old Anita popping out of nowhere. Anxious to see more- please update soon!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from arkeus
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Fun. Maybe this Anita take on magic will have a benefit effect on willow :-)
let's see how it goes :-)
Review By [arkeus] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kiwi
Review:
lol! anita as a kid! too funny. :)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
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